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Hey!! You did SUPER good on perspective!!! I’m proud of you for that, especially as a new artist!! Keep it going dude I’m excited to see part 2!!!!
I think you did a very good job on this bro!
Replying to Batman
Thank you very much!! ❤️
hey your doing great keep up with your skills and the passion that you have and the way of the work that you have put in KEEP IT UP !!! bikerone
Replying to bikerone
Thank you! I will definitely keep it up, and do my best to make the next chapter even better!! ❤️
Eugh..
Replying to multigamerclub
Why are you "eugh" ing
Replying to DNAstrid
Yeah why is he eughing about?
I love the fact of visual progress the artist made in this story and gave valid explanations why it was so
Wow! I read every bit of dialogue and text in this with no hesitation. Notes: at first glance of the cover art I thought Terra was going to be a teacher, but I'm actually glad she isn't. The plotline and storyline feel set in stone, and I like it, it adds more meaning to the series as a whole. The sex was great, I'm wondering what happened to Zill during the sex scene. Overall this story is a great addition to the collective of yoff comics and I'm already dying for chapter 2 I'd rate it a 9/10
Replying to DNAstrid
When Zill's eyes glowed it reminded me of Aang in that one scene XD
Replying to DNAstrid
So tru
Replying to DNAstrid
Hey, thank you! I appreciate your review!! To answer your question as to what happened to Zill during the sex scene: He just lost control and unleashed his full potential! 😅 I’m very happy you enjoyed this comic, and I’ll be sure to make Chapter 2 even better! ❤️
Replying to kersync
That's very exciting, I can't wait to read it And I hope you enjoy making as well <33
Man the brother is a massive dick
Replying to BluesComic
For reason though! Albeit the reason a bit douschy, but where it seems like the storyline is going, the brother will actually quit the yasei and protect his brother
Zilla needs some homies to back him up when he gets jumped like that